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content/dad/003.md

@@ -99,3 +99,7 @@ Yes.
 I don't remember any of the rest of the trip. All I remember is that we watched *Fellowship of the Ring* and that, at one point on the drive back, I asked a question about angular momentum.
 
 > You wanted to promise him, visibly, that you were still smart. You wanted to appeal to him in a way that you knew he'd take well.
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+I wanted him to be okay with me.
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+> Dig deeper.

content/dad/005.md

@@ -126,3 +126,5 @@ No answer.
 > What **did** you want from him?
 
 I struggled for a way to put into words the anxiety, panic, and depression that had slowly taken over my life from the moment puberty had hit, exacerbated by the fact that I was living in a place where I felt distinctly unwelcome. I think I wound up mumbling something about the fact that, with my dad gone all evening at the bar, I had no contact with someone in utter control of my life other than through punishment. Even then, as a child, that only felt partly true.
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+> Dig deeper.

content/dad/006.md

@@ -67,4 +67,6 @@ I watched them and I thought about going to knock on the door at my mom's house.
 
 Yes.
 
+> Dig deeper.
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 ![Rock park](/rock-park.jpg)

content/dad/007.md

@@ -88,3 +88,7 @@ Yes. Matthew had died, and we were doing Thanksgiving together.
 It was. He had come to the wedding, so the truth was out, as it were, about JD and I, though he surely had known already. During one of his prior visits to Fort Collins, he had invited me down to grab dinner with him in Lakewood sometime, saying, "You can bring your...ah, you can bring James with you, too."
 
 > Tell me about 'man'.
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+Matthew was dead. Madison was conceived. She would be born soon.
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+> Dig deeper.

content/dad/008.md

@@ -150,3 +150,5 @@ Still looking forward to seeing you Madison. This weekend is a bit of a rush, bu
 
 Love Dad
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+> Dig deeper.