diff --git a/content/core/017.md b/content/core/017.md index 7dfbd17..b6978a9 100644 --- a/content/core/017.md +++ b/content/core/017.md @@ -13,9 +13,9 @@ Ranna was a gay fox, a bit pudgy, with two tails he readily admitted were an ear Makyo was intentionally a transfeminine vixen who didn't pass. -Maddy's a fat, dumpy, nerdy cis girl who dresses to hide her weight. +Maddy's a dumpy, nerdy cis girl who dresses to hide her weight. -> And Madison's a fat, dumpy, nerdy transfeminine girl who doesn't pass and dresses to hide her weight? +> And Madison's a dumpy, nerdy transfeminine girl who doesn't pass and dresses to hide her weight? I suppose.