diff --git a/content/core/011.md b/content/core/011.md
index 64cec55..c3b7a79 100644
--- a/content/core/011.md
+++ b/content/core/011.md
@@ -61,4 +61,4 @@ Hey, I said some bits weren't as easy. He left me with a lot of him in me.
 
 I pay for his past as well as mine.
 
-So, when Michael mentioned that she wanted to go on a date with someone else while we were together, well, it touched a nerve.
+So, when Michael mentioned that he wanted to go on a date with someone else while we were together, well, it touched a nerve.
diff --git a/content/core/024.md b/content/core/024.md
index d144519..2c01900 100644
--- a/content/core/024.md
+++ b/content/core/024.md
@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@ A rangefinder camera uses a ghostly yellow image overlaid atop the real image wh
 
 And Younes was one of the means of slowly dragging that back into focus.
 
-It doesn't matter how right or wrong it was of me to this tool. It does matter how wrong I was in the mechanics of the scenario.
+It doesn't matter how right or wrong it was of me to use this tool. It does matter how wrong I was in the mechanics of the scenario.
 
 > You hid him. You covered him up and kept him from the world. You interacted with a completely different crowd, as Younes than you did as Makyo or Macchi. When that overlapped with Rikky, it was awkward.
 
diff --git a/content/core/026.md b/content/core/026.md
index b43ac75..b658f49 100644
--- a/content/core/026.md
+++ b/content/core/026.md
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ I was so ashamed.
 
 Even my punishment was wrong.
 
-> It was one of the last things Margaras heard from you.
+> It was the last thing Margaras heard from you.
 
 Never mind stopping myself from creating Younes, nevermind stopping myself from chemical castration; if I could go back in time, I would stop myself from saying anything for just a few more days.
 
diff --git a/content/core/028.md b/content/core/028.md
index 5fb1f23..015022b 100644
--- a/content/core/028.md
+++ b/content/core/028.md
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ date: 2019-08-18
 weight: 28
 ---
 
-TIASAP stand for *The Ill-Advised Self-Administration Period*.
+TIASAP stands for *The Ill-Advised Self-Administration Period*.
 
 This is why.
 
diff --git a/content/jay/04.md b/content/jay/04.md
index 4faf86e..7214a8a 100644
--- a/content/jay/04.md
+++ b/content/jay/04.md
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ Do you fear him, then?
 
 Fair enough.
 
-He got mean. That's when I got physical. That's when his anger got hot.
+He got mean. That's when he got physical. That's when his anger got hot.
 
 He started reading my emails. He found some reply notifications to some posts on a forum, where kids were talking about puberty. As kids do, there was some dick-size comparing. He read that aloud in front of my mom and mocked me for my answer. I had said seven inches. It was generous, sure, but keep in mind, I was way underweight at the time--