From d18ba93a67039608a0dda01f4ceb91ee390c4cbe Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Madison Scott-Clary Date: Tue, 22 Oct 2019 08:58:04 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] Editing pass --- content/self-harm/suicide/003.md | 2 +- content/self-harm/suicide/013.md | 4 ++-- content/self-harm/suicide/_index.md | 2 +- content/self-harm/suicide/notes.md | 0 4 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) delete mode 100644 content/self-harm/suicide/notes.md diff --git a/content/self-harm/suicide/003.md b/content/self-harm/suicide/003.md index 8c840d4..ecdaf4f 100644 --- a/content/self-harm/suicide/003.md +++ b/content/self-harm/suicide/003.md @@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ The biggest thing I've taken away from therapy has been an increased sense of se Yes. That's why I'm moving so much more slowly with it now. I have slid off the pedestal and into the slow morass of depression. I can feel it coloring my life with anhedonia. -> Not coloring, no. Sapping the color. Not even black-and-white, but an absense. A missingness. +> Not coloring, no. Sapping the color. Not even black-and-white, but an absence. A missingness. Yes. diff --git a/content/self-harm/suicide/013.md b/content/self-harm/suicide/013.md index 3bb9448..070a607 100644 --- a/content/self-harm/suicide/013.md +++ b/content/self-harm/suicide/013.md @@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ weight: 13 Let's talk about something else. Please. -> One more quesiton, and then we can. +> One more question, and then we can. Okay. @@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ I think a long ways. > You think? -Well, every time I think I've come a long ways, I do something horribly stupid again. Every time I think I'm over all this, I tear at myself. Every time I think I'm getting good at talking about my mental health, I wind up in this pit where I have to destroy myself, to make it physically evident that I'm unwell in some invisible way. +Well, every time I think I've come a long ways, I do something horribly stupid again. Every time I think I'm over all this, I tear at myself. Every time I think I'm getting good at talking about my mental health, I wind up in this pit where I have to destroy myself, to make it physically evident that I'm unwell in some invisible way. I always have. I tried to blind myself in 1996, remember? I tried to lose a finger, a leg. I cut. I burned. > Is it about proving that you're unwell? diff --git a/content/self-harm/suicide/_index.md b/content/self-harm/suicide/_index.md index ef0a78d..908bb14 100644 --- a/content/self-harm/suicide/_index.md +++ b/content/self-harm/suicide/_index.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ --- type: serial -background: '#222222' +background: '#16161d' color: '#aaaaaa' quote: '#999999' back: '/self-harm/3' diff --git a/content/self-harm/suicide/notes.md b/content/self-harm/suicide/notes.md deleted file mode 100644 index e69de29..0000000