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@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ She frowned all the same and put down her coffee, padding over to the window to
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"No!" I said, realized that sounded forceful, and added, "No, sorry. Just smells like you, is all, and I feel like I got punched in the face with memories from school."
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At that, she laughed, though she did leave the window open, a trimmer chattering beneath her window marring her scent with traces of exhaust. "Well, good ones, I hope. Still, I'm sorry it's such a mess."
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At that, she laughed, though she did leave the window open, a trimmer chattering below marring her scent with traces of exhaust. "Well, good ones, I hope. Still, I'm sorry it's such a mess."
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"It's fine, Kay, really. Just random memories--" *Tell her, tell her, tell her,* some part of my mind was urging. It had Jeremy's voice. "--like going to concerts, or your senior recital." *Tell her!* the voice shouted, pounded on the walls, clawed at my insides, all while half-truths spilled from my lips.
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@ -57,13 +57,13 @@ She trailed off and averted her eyes over to the kitchen, focusing on a wayward
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She puffed out a breath and then took a long sip of her coffee. "Mm, right. I'm out of practice in being around someone as...I don't know, genuine as you."
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It all tugged at my heartstrings, and I prayed for the bravery to reassure her. "You seem kind of jittery. Everything alright?"
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It all tugged at my heartstrings, and I prayed for the bravery to reassure her. "You seem kind of anxious. Everything alright?"
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"Yeah, I'm just jittery, I guess. Nervous."
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"Nervous about anything in particular?"
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She squinted over at me, "You've gotten good at your therapist voice."
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She squinted over at me. "You've gotten good at your therapist voice."
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I laughed.
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