Edits, finished majority of Idumea

marsh/content/017.tex

@@ -196,7 +196,7 @@ We talked for a while longer, though descriptions were slim, repetitions of what
 
 ``Hey,'' they said at last, once the line of questions had died down. ``What do you say about inviting Vos and Pierre over? Maybe they'd like to meet me.''
 
-I winced. I'd been dreading this moment. I'd intentionally not brought up the subject of Marsh's partners, lest that dissuade my cocladists. Admonitions rang in my ears, Hanne's and Dry Grass's. \emph{I'm a bit wary you won't get what you want,} Hanne had said. \emph{The potential for pain,} Dry Grass had said.
+I winced. I'd been dreading this moment. I'd intentionally not brought up the subject of Marsh's partners, lest that dissuade my cocladists. Admonitions rang in my ears, Hanne's and Dry Grass's. \emph{I'm a bit wary you won't get what you want,} Hanne had said. \emph{The potential for pain,} Dry Grass had said. New Marsh had these memories, now, too, but I had no way of knowing just how close they were to the surface, whether they were even at the forefront of their mind.
 
 There was a long silence that followed as we all seemed to digest the ramifications of this.
 
@@ -220,7 +220,7 @@ She swayed on her feet, eventually reaching out a hand to prop herself up agains
 
 ``One of the changes made in the System during the downtime was to enable cross-tree merging. It hasn't been announced yet, but Sedge and I were at the meetings, so we, uh\ldots{}''
 
-``I'm all of us,'' New Marsh said, voice strained from the force of Pierre's hug. ``I'm their entire clade. I'm as much of them as I could manage.''
+``I'm all of us,'' New Marsh said, voice strained from the force of Pierre's hug. ``I'm the entire clade. I'm as much of us as I could manage.''
 
 Pierre quickly unwound his arms from them, staggering backwards with such hurriedness that he nearly tripped were it not for Vos, there to catch him. ``What the fuck\ldots{}''