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@ -130,13 +130,13 @@ She scoffed. ``Probably the second.''
Sasha laughed and turned the ruffling into a noogie. ``This is not a competition, Motes,'' she chided. ``But if it were, then yes, you would win. She has cut off even A Finger Pointing.''
Squeaking and laughing, the skunk sat up, pulling herself away from the knuckles grinding against her scalp. ``I thought they were on better terms, though. Ma met with her once a month, even.''
Squeaking and laughing, the skunk sat up, pulling herself away from the knuckles grinding against her scalp. ``I thought they were on better terms, though. Ma met with her once in a while, even.''
``When she found out that I had joined Au Lieu Du Rêve, Hammered silver cut all contact with the fifth, yes?''
``When she found out what I had done, Hammered silver cut all contact with the fifth, yes?''
``Mmhm. Did that include Pointillist?''
``Not at first, but certainly not long after. I think Hammered Silver is more mad with her than any of the rest of the stanza.''
``Ohhh yes. I think Hammered Silver is more mad with her than any of the rest of the stanza.''
``God,'' Motes muttered. ``She really does sound like a total b-word.''
@ -144,7 +144,7 @@ Squeaking and laughing, the skunk sat up, pulling herself away from the knuckles
The smaller skunk giggled helplessly, slouching down until she was able to use Sasha's thigh as a pillow. ``Okay, but why does she hate Ma, though? She is, like\ldots the nicest person in the whole world.''
``She really is, at least to us, but she is also uncompromising to her very core. She stood up for herself and Beholden as a couple, she stood up for you as you are, she stood up for your dynamic as a family--'' Sasha took a deep breath through gritted teeth. ``And she stood up for me, for which I am endlessly appreciative, and endlessly frustrated that she should have cause to.''
``She really is, at least to us, but she is also uncompromising to her very core. She stood up for herself and Beholden as a couple, she stood up for you as you are, she stood up for your dynamic as a family--'' Sasha took a deep breath through gritted teeth. ``And she stood up for me—she always has—for which I am endlessly appreciative, and endlessly frustrated that she should have cause to.''
``So Hammered Silver is upset that Ma has principles,'' Motes said flatly. ``Okay. Got it. Good good, good good good good. Wonderful.''