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@ -176,8 +176,6 @@ Cf. Shakespeare
> And all the men and women merely players;\
> They have their exits and their entrances \[...\]
"As You Like It" act II scene VII
#### \[...\] *through a glass darkly.*
Cf. 1 Cor 13:11-13 (KJV)
@ -186,6 +184,18 @@ Cf. 1 Cor 13:11-13 (KJV)
((Maybe more from the chapter? I also had a thought about A Scanner Darkly but forgot))
#### *The Sightwright suffered as I do, as The Oneirotect does, and perhaps even as The Woman did.*
Cf. John Winthrop
> Wee must delight in eache other; make other's conditions our oune; rejoice together, mourne together, labour and suffer together, allwayes haueving before our eyes our commission and community in the worke, as members of the same body.
((Rye has big thoughts on clades/System as one body, also community and commission in light of what's coming in the chapter))
#### *With art comes fear.*
I had originally intended referencing I book I used for a season when teaching, *Art & Fear* by David Bayles and Ted Orland, and even shaped the words I truly spoke that day to fit. On rereading, however, I came across the first sentence of chapter 2: "Those who would make art might well begin by reflecting on the fate of those who preceded them: most who began, quit." It was at this point that I had to stop reading and pace anxiously the fields behind our cluster of townhouses, watering with tears the thirsty grasses.
## Part 6
#### *Why do birds, as the poet says, suddenly appear* \[...\]