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Fix cut-off dates and reasons.

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@ -132,13 +132,13 @@ She scoffed. "Probably the second."
Sasha laughed and turned the ruffling into a noogie. "This is not a competition, Motes," she chided. "But if it were, then yes, you would win. She has cut off even A Finger Pointing."
Squeaking and laughing, the skunk sat up, pulling herself away from the knuckles grinding against her scalp. "I thought they were on better terms, though. Ma met with her once a month, even."
Squeaking and laughing, the skunk sat up, pulling herself away from the knuckles grinding against her scalp. "I thought they were on better terms, though. Ma met with her once in a while, even."
"When she found out that I had joined Au Lieu Du Rêve, Hammered silver cut all contact with the fifth, yes?"
"When she found out what I had done, Hammered silver cut all contact with the fifth, yes?"
"Mmhm. Did that include Pointillist?"
"Not at first, but certainly not long after. I think Hammered Silver is more mad with her than any of the rest of the stanza."
"Oh yes. I think Hammered Silver is more mad with her than any of the rest of the stanza."
"God," Motes muttered. "She really does sound like a total b-word."
@ -146,7 +146,7 @@ Squeaking and laughing, the skunk sat up, pulling herself away from the knuckles
The smaller skunk giggled helplessly, slouching down until she was able to use Sasha's thigh as a pillow. "Okay, but why does she hate Ma, though? She is, like...the nicest person in the whole world."
"She really is, at least to us, but she is also uncompromising to her very core. She stood up for herself and Beholden as a couple, she stood up for you as you are, she stood up for your dynamic as a family–" Sasha took a deep breath through gritted teeth. "And she stood up for me, for which I am endlessly appreciative, and endlessly frustrated that she should have cause to."
"She really is, at least to us, but she is also uncompromising to her very core. She stood up for herself and Beholden as a couple, she stood up for you as you are, she stood up for your dynamic as a family–" Sasha took a deep breath through gritted teeth. "And she stood up for me — she always has — for which I am endlessly appreciative, and endlessly frustrated that she should have cause to."
"So Hammered Silver is upset that Ma has principles," Motes said flatly. "Okay. Got it. Good good, good good good good. Wonderful."