From 6166bc14f99135643df0afbe5d6956de4c311745 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Madison Rye Progress Date: Tue, 4 Jun 2024 18:30:41 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] Typos --- content/read/049.md | 2 +- content/read/051.md | 2 +- 2 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/content/read/049.md b/content/read/049.md index 3709065..479b059 100644 --- a/content/read/049.md +++ b/content/read/049.md @@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ Ey laughed and bumped eir shoulder against its own. "Of course." Sarah raised her glass. "To the proper amount of excitement." -Dear hoisted its own glass as thought it was an ale-filled tankard. *"Precisely, my dear!"* +Dear hoisted its own glass as though it was an ale-filled tankard. *"Precisely, my dear!"* Codrin smiled, sipping eir wine as ey watched. *Proper amount of excitement, indeed.* diff --git a/content/read/051.md b/content/read/051.md index 6af4dcd..0d807f0 100644 --- a/content/read/051.md +++ b/content/read/051.md @@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ Eir frown deepened. Ey looked down at the letter ey still held in eir hand. "Well--" -"No, disregard the letter, Ioan." She laughed and added, "Or at least disregard it for now. There is info in there, I am sure, but the message is in the dynamic. Dear is an asshole, but a clever one. It has ensured that it doesn't re-learn the Name and that you never learn it for yourself, all while making sure that it becomes an in-joke between our two clades. It has removed culpability from the Bălan clade and given both itself and me an out, should someone like True Name come asking. She can come hounding you for information like she did after that first letter and all she would find is a clever little way for lovers to poke fun at each other. Let me guess, Codrin said something about how it feels like this is something a Bălan could hold over an Odist." +"No, disregard the letter, Ioan." She laughed and added, "Or at least disregard it for now. There is info in there, I am sure, but the message is in the dynamic. Dear is an asshole, but a clever one. It has ensured that it does not re-learn the Name and that you never learn it for yourself, all while making sure that it becomes an in-joke between our two clades. It has removed culpability from the Bălan clade and given both itself and me an out, should someone like True Name come asking. She can come hounding you for information like she did after that first letter and all she would find is a clever little way for lovers to poke fun at each other. Let me guess, Codrin said something about how it feels like this is something a Bălan could hold over an Odist." Ey blinked, lifted the letter, and read aloud, "I do worry that this is the type of thing a Bălan could hold over the head of an Odist, but--"