Edits, lead into Mitzvot
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@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ He nodded. "It all just sounded so normal. There didn't seem like anything else
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"Artemis? Is that what they're calling the remote...ship? Vehicle?"
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He nodded. "Vehicle. She said they're calling it Artemis, that I should tag my fork #Artemis, and that those on the ship were either Artemisians or Sea People, which I didn't get."
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He nodded. "Either, really. It carries people. She said they're calling it Artemis, that I should tag my fork #Artemis, and that those on the ship were either Artemisians or Sea People, which I didn't get."
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"Sea People might be a reference to something from the *Mythology,*" Codrin leaned back in the seat, thinking. "Or it could be a reference to a theory about a marauding group of seafarers during the Bronze Age collapse. One that had sacked much of the ancient near east and northern Africa, leading to the prolongation of the collapse."
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@ -120,7 +120,7 @@ For eir part, ey began structuring the project. There would have to be the journ
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"Well, in part, but also someone who thinks about what they're recording," ey said, tapping at eir temple. "They aren't a scribe or a court recorder, but someone there to witness and digest a conversation."
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"Like a clerk?" He grinned. "We used to have one of those for our club, who would take minutes of the meetings and such."
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"Like a clerk?" He grinned. "We used to have one of those for our club who would take minutes of the meetings and such."
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Ey nodded. "Certainly closer to that than a recorder, yeah. I bring this up because that will be my job in all of this, but I think it'll also be yours. Things like the *History* are all well and good, and I loved putting the work into the writing, but I also really enjoy doing this. I may wish that the things I get caught up in weren't always so dramatic, but I'll take what I can get."
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