Edits, lead into Mitzvot

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@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ But for now, ey was safe inside, laying in supplies, even if they were simply em
 
 The only conversation ey'd allowed about the entire affair came at night, when the three of them had piled into bed, each in their familiar order but pressed now up against each other, perhaps drawing comfort against the onrushing storm.
 
-"How's it going to feel working alongside True Name instead of against her?" Dear's partner asked, voice muffled by a pillow as the fox kneaded on their shoulders.
+"How's it going to feel working alongside True Name instead of against her?" their partner asked, voice muffled by a pillow as the fox kneaded on their shoulders.
 
 Codrin replied, voice equally muffled against the back of Dear's neck, "I don't know if I was working against her, necessarily. It felt like it at the time, but now it just feels like we were both doing our jobs."
 
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ The reprieve lasted until morning when, upon waking, Codrin discovered a note on
 > * Leadership: myself, True Name
 > * Scientist: Dr. Tycho Brahe
 > * Recorder: you
-> * Representative 1: Why Ask Questions Here At The End Of All Things of the Ode clade
+> * Representative 1: Why Ask Questions, Here At The End Of All Things of the Ode clade
 >
 > However, we will need one more representative. It would be vanishingly easy for me or Jonas to pick someone who would be fitting for our enterprises, but why do that when it would potentially be much more interesting to let you pick? It ought to be someone outside the Ode clade or your polycule, but beyond that, I find myself fascinated by the idea that you --- you, who have your feet on the ground and head in the clouds --- might pick someone about whom I know nothing. With two Odists on the team already, one of whom is one of my up-tree instances, I am sure you can see that we will have the situation under control from our end.
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