Edits, lead into Mitzvot

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Madison Scott-Clary
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@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ The thirdracer chattered their teeth, looking pleased.
The skunk raised her glass to him.
"When we first heard from the Artemisians, True Name met me at my sim and quoted a snippet of poetry by Sarah Williams: Reach me down my Tycho Brahe,---I would know him when we meet, When I share my later science, sitting humbly at his feet; He may know the law of all things, yet be ignorant of how We are working to completion, working on from then till now.
"When we first heard from the Artemisians, True Name met me at my sim and quoted a snippet of poetry by Sarah Williams: *Reach me down my Tycho Brahe,---I would know him when we meet, When I share my later science, sitting humbly at his feet; He may know the law of all things, yet be ignorant of how We are working to completion, working on from then till now.*
"See, Tycho Brahe is a name I picked for myself twenty years ago when Codrin interviewed me for the *History*. Brahe was an astronomer born eight centuries ago this year. A lot of his science was bunk, but that's what the poem says, isn't it? He may know the law of all things, but we're the ones with the later science.
@ -38,13 +38,13 @@ The mood had settled into somber, present, and while most eyes were dry, he coul
"I won't quote the whole thing, since it's quite long, but there's a few bits that I'd like to share with you before I leave.
"There has been a something wanting in my nature until now; I can dimly comprehend it,---that I might have been more kind, Might have cherished you more wisely, as the one I leave behind.
"*There has been a something wanting in my nature until now; I can dimly comprehend it,---that I might have been more kind, Might have cherished you more wisely, as the one I leave behind.*
"Perhaps I should have cherished you all more while I was here. I really don't know. It's not in my nature to cherish people, for better or worse, but maybe I should have cherished my time here on Castor, or even back on Lagrange, more than I did. It was still home, wasn't it? I lived here. I loved what I did. 'What, for us,' Williams writes. 'Are all distractions of men's fellowship and smiles? What, for us, the goddess Pleasure, with her meretricious wiles?' Pleasure came second, and the fallout of that is that I was fundamentally unhappy, and thus perhaps unable to cherish.
"Perhaps I should have cherished you all more while I was here. I really don't know. It's not in my nature to cherish people, for better or worse, but maybe I should have cherished my time here on Castor, or even back on Lagrange, more than I did. It was still home, wasn't it? I lived here. I loved what I did. *What, for us,* Williams writes. *Are all distractions of men's fellowship and smiles? What, for us, the goddess Pleasure, with her meretricious wiles?* Pleasure came second, and the fallout of that is that I was fundamentally unhappy, and thus perhaps unable to cherish.
"That's not to say that I won't miss you all. Some of you are up on Artemis already, and some more may join in these last few days before the Ansible shuts down, but no matter what, I *will* miss you all.
"It's just that, as the poem says, "I have sown, like Tycho Brahe, that a greater man may reap; But if none should do my reaping, 'twill disturb me in my sleep." I'm headed off to newer places, to learn the later sciences at the feet of those who have been traveling for so long. I've done my work, though I've left it incomplete. Many of you will have much to work on to complete it. You must!
"It's just that, as the poem says, *I have sown, like Tycho Brahe, that a greater man may reap; But if none should do my reaping, 'twill disturb me in my sleep.* I'm headed off to newer places, to learn the later sciences at the feet of those who have been traveling for so long. I've done my work, though I've left it incomplete. Many of you will have much to work on to complete it. You must!
"In fact, I think the only thing I'm leaving behind that is well and truly finished to my liking is my sim, and even then, it sounds like perisystem engineers are working on getting visual transmission piped in."
@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ There were some smiles around the table, but no laughter. All were focused entir
"I could draw out such a goodbye, but I won't. Not more than I already have. You'll have your memories, won't you?"
He lifted his half-full glass of wine to the sky and, even as the other members of the dinner began to lift theirs, downed it in two coarse swallows. "Though my soul may set in darkness, it will rise in perfect light. I have loved the stars too fondly to be fearful of the night."
He lifted his half-full glass of wine to the sky and, even as the other members of the dinner began to lift theirs, downed it in two coarse swallows. "*Though my soul may set in darkness, it will rise in perfect light. I have loved the stars too fondly to be fearful of the night.*"
Perhaps they toasted to him. Perhaps they said goodbye to him, calling out. Perhaps some of them did cry, as he knew he would if he stayed any longer.
@ -86,4 +86,4 @@ He nodded and smiled. An earnest smile. A true smile.
He'd finally done it. He'd finally done *something.* This future was his. Even if it was all just a dream, it was *his* dream. His dream of stars to make of it what he would.
"*Anem.* It is finished."
*We will dream of stars,* Stolon had said, and he knew they would.