Edits for v2

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Madison Scott-Clary
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@ -10,9 +10,9 @@ She felt out of her league. Everyone did, or said they did, here on her team, bu
It's that no one seemed to take the lost all that seriously. It was like addiction, or plane crashes, or suicide. Something to look at, to study long enough to say "Ah, *this* is happening now," and then set aside. Conversation-piece science.
People admitted that the phenomenon was there, but only in as much as it didn't affect that many people. A simple number to point to. See how small?
People admitted that the phenomenon was there, but only inasmuch as it didn't affect that many people. A simple number to point to. See how small?
It was as though the brains of the lost were just...elsewhere. Just dreaming. Implants showing them connected while no such connection existed.
It was as though the minds of the lost were just...elsewhere. Just dreaming. Implants showing them connected while no such connection existed.
There was no sense to it, though. No rhyme or reason to why such a thing would happen to the patient. Some of her team were pulling together all of the facts about the population that they could, from demographics to physical stature, searching for clues in the rig and the 'net itself, sim histories to go with personal ones. The neuroscientists were digging into what was going on within the brain, and what few scans they had from before someone had gotten lost. Their two pet lawyers --- just law students on internship, both also versed in stats --- were digging into the legal status of the lost as well as writing queries to procure patient medical histories.