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Madison Scott-Clary
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@ -16,11 +16,11 @@ The file arrived promptly. Eir shoulders sagged. It began with `-----BEGIN AES B
"What's an AES block?"
*"An old encryption algorithm."* Dear looked a little embarrassed. *"And I mean* old. *We like old things. That's why she suggested it might be from one of us."*
*"An old encryption algorithm."* Dear looked a little embarrassed. *"And I mean* old. *We like old things. That is why she suggested it might be from one of us."*
"You don't sound convinced."
*"I am not. You must understand that this is not something any of the clade wants known. It is just a name, yes, but it is important to us in a way that is hard to overstate."* Dear sighed. *"Much of the clade is of the opinion that, if we could simply wipe the Name from our minds, we would. For a member of the clade to break that trust is nigh unthinkable. It is acting against our very nature."*
*"I am not. You must understand that this is not something any of the clade wants known. It is just a name, yes, but it is important to us in a way that is hard to overstate."* Dear sighed. *"Much of the clade is of the opinion that, if we could simply wipe the Name from our minds, we would. For a member of the clade to break that trust is nigh unthinkable. It is acting against our very nature."*
"You're right in that I probably can't understand the importance here. Still, I trust you on that. A friend, maybe? A mutual?"
@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ Ioan frowned. "I'm trying to square your use of the poet's work in your very nam
Ioan nodded. "So do you want me--"
*"You do not need to worry about the file itself. That's why I did not just forward it to you automatically."* Dear paused, then added, *"Though I probably should have. Here I am talking about you having a more complete picture and not giving you everything."*
*"You do not need to worry about the file itself. That is why I did not just forward it to you automatically."* Dear paused, then added, *"Though I probably should have. Here I am talking about you having a more complete picture and not giving you everything."*
"It's alright. I'm picking it up as we go along."
@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ It nodded. *"It is important, though. Amanuenses form an* Umwelt, *so this is pa
"Okay, good. I gave AES a check, and you're right, that's ridiculously old. Can't you just crack it?"
*"We could. Some of us probably already have. I want the key, though. It's probably a word or something, and may prove interesting in its own right."*
*"We could. Some of us probably already have. I want the key, though. It is probably a word or something, and may prove interesting in its own right."*
"Interesting?"
@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ It nodded. *"It is important, though. Amanuenses form an* Umwelt, *so this is pa
"Ah. Good point. I'll do some digging on old cryptography, too, and see what all's out there."
*"Good fucking luck. Cryptonerds were --- are --- very wordy. There's going to be a boatload to sort through."*
*"Good fucking luck. Cryptonerds were --- are --- very wordy. There is going to be a boatload to sort through."*
Ey grinned, "I'll fork and research, then."