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@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ A man appeared on the platform.
Qoheleth.
Ioan wasn't sure how ey knew. It was a primal knowledge, an immediate judgement than *must* be correct, something more than what was implied by him being there, in that place at that time. Qoheleth.
Ioan wasn't sure how ey knew. It was a primal knowledge, an immediate judgement that *must* be correct, something more than what was implied by him being there, in that place at that time. Qoheleth.
He was about Dear's height, a touch heavier, and had affected a greying beard and receding hairline. His clothes were a simple cream tunic and trousers of...was that leather? Coarse linen blurred by distance and softened by age? Atop it all, a ruddy brown robe.
@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ It would doubtless be corrupted. They always were.
By the time Ioan managed to look back to the room, the conservatives had all left or quit.
Uproar was too strong a word for what happened among the remainder of thecrowd. There were a few scattered shouts, mostly of surprise, but the rest was concerned murmuring. For its part, Dear stamped a foot and began to pace in the small space it had, tail lashing behind it. *"When Memory is full,"* it was muttering. *"Put on the perfect Lid ---"*
Uproar was too strong a word for what happened among the remainder of the crowd. There were a few scattered shouts, mostly of surprise, but the rest was concerned murmuring. For its part, Dear stamped a foot and began to pace in the small space it had, tail lashing behind it. *"When Memory is full,"* it was muttering. *"Put on the perfect Lid ---"*
"What just happened?" Ioan whispered to the fox when it came close.