From 04b83433fee361a93ef4879976a3db45d79096af Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Madison Scott-Clary Date: Mon, 9 May 2022 18:22:28 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] typo --- content/read/007.md | 2 +- content/read/029.md | 4 ++-- 2 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/content/read/007.md b/content/read/007.md index 1d5dd28..ef647f3 100644 --- a/content/read/007.md +++ b/content/read/007.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ # Part II --- Progression -> The reason that this association between Secession and Launch is as important as it is is multifaceted. Yes, there was a similarity between the acts, of dividing, of leaving; much of the first part of this history will be spent dissecting those. Yes, there was political maneuvering both phys- and sys-side in order to accomplish them both; you will read about that. Yes, there was discussion about the wisdom of actions such as these; this you will read about as well. +> The reason that this association between Secession and Launch is important is due to its multifaceted nature. Yes, there was a similarity between the acts, of dividing, of leaving; much of the first part of this history will be spent dissecting those. Yes, there was political maneuvering both phys- and sys-side in order to accomplish them both; you will read about that. Yes, there was discussion about the wisdom of actions such as these; this you will read about as well. > > The facet upon which this first chapter focuses is, however, one of correspondences. Both involved separation of one group from another. Both involved the construction and modification of a political system --- or perhaps non-system --- in order to accommodate the goals involved. > diff --git a/content/read/029.md b/content/read/029.md index 46a20cb..4d9b70a 100644 --- a/content/read/029.md +++ b/content/read/029.md @@ -44,13 +44,13 @@ Codrin nodded, then, realizing that ey could barely see Brahe next to em, murmur They sat on that hill in silence, leaning back on their hands and watching the stars overhead. -It had taken a few moments for Ioan to get eir bearings when they had first started watching. The stars overhead were stationary, but in a way that ey was not used to. There was the barest hint at a bare hint of movement, a dream of parallax, and the constellations didn't feel right. One star, brighter than the rest, was visible low over the horizon. There was no moon. It was quite unnerving in some indescribable way. +It had taken a few moments for Codrin to get eir bearings when they had first started watching. The stars overhead were stationary, but in a way that ey was not used to. There was the barest hint at a bare hint of movement, a dream of parallax, and the constellations didn't feel right. One star, brighter than the rest, was visible low over the horizon. There was no moon. It was quite unnerving in some indescribable way. "What is this?" "It is a view from outside the LV." -Ioan frowned up at the sky. "I didn't think that pictures could make it into the System. Systems." +Codrin frowned up at the sky. "I didn't think that pictures could make it into the System. Systems." Brahe sighed quietly. "They can't. This is just a projection. A description based on what I know the stars to look like combined with information based on where they are relative to the fisheye lens on the side of the Dreamer Module."