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@@ -164,7 +164,7 @@ Codrin nodded dumbly.
 
 *"No, no. Not at first, at least. The deal she struck with the other members of the Council was that her responsibility would be split evenly among the ten. At first, The Only Time I Know My True Name Is When I Dream was the only one to sit council, then as her responsibilities to the secession process began to grow, more of Michelle's ongoing projects were given to further first lines."*
 
-"You said not at first. Did she --- the Odists --- wound up with more than an equal share of responsibility?"
+"You said not at first. Did she --- the Odists --- wind up with more than an equal share of responsibility?"
 
 Dear nodded. *"It was slow and subtle, and, initially, unintentional. She was--"*
 
@@ -192,7 +192,7 @@ Codrin shook eir head. "At least, I don't know the acronym."
 
 "That sounds disgusting." Ey thought a moment, then shook eir head. "Or impossible."
 
-"Capitalism was never one to let impossibility stand in its way," Dear's partner laughed.
+"Capitalism was never one to let impossibility stand in its way." Their partner laughed.
 
 *"Yes, well, there were at least still those phys-side who wished to help. Dreamers to the last."* It smiled fondly, lifting its glass to swirl the wine within. *"Many of them uploaded. You have doubtless talked to a few without knowing. I don't know if Yared --- he was our biggest champion --- decided on joining the Launch. Perhaps he did. If he did not, I will nudge Ioan to him if May Then My Name does not do so first. If he did, you may yet meet him."*
 
@@ -200,7 +200,7 @@ Codrin shook eir head. "At least, I don't know the acronym."
 
 This time, the exaggerated care when setting down its glass was missing, as it nearly slammed it on the table. *"I will not answer that."*
 
-"Dear," its partner murmured.
+"Dear," their partner murmured.
 
 It was nearly a minute before it mastered its anger. *"No, I will not answer. Not now, at least."*