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@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ May Then My Name Die With Me sat across from Ioan at their dining table, looking
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"This feels unusually formal."
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"Yes, well, I'd like to be able to see your expressions." Ey grinned. "Also, it's easier to write when I don't have a skunk hanging onto my arm."
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"Yes, well, I'd like to be able to see your expressions." Ey grinned, adding, "Also, it's easier to write when I don't have a skunk hanging onto my arm."
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She rolled her eyes, sighing dramatically. "I suppose. Ask away then, O archivist."
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@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ She rolled her eyes, sighing dramatically. "I suppose. Ask away then, O archivis
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"Alright." Ey tested the nib of eir pen on the corner of the page and then began to jot in eir comfortable shorthand. "Uncomfortable question first. When did you upload?"
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May frowned down to the table, drawing lazy Lissajous curves on its surface. "I would have gone for the shit-sandwich approach. Do you promise to ask lighter questions after?"
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May frowned down to the table, drawing lazy Lissajous curves on its surface with a claw. "I would have gone for the shit-sandwich approach. Do you promise to ask lighter questions after?"
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Ioan laughed, nodded.
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@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ Ey lifted eir pen from the page. "Can you tell me why? I can leave it out of the
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Ey laughed. "Alright, if you won't talk about that, that's okay. It's enough that you mention it; I'll keep my eye out."
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She reached out and took eir off-hand in her own, brushing thumbpad over eir knuckles. "Thank you, dear. Do you have a more pleasant question for me to answer?"
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She reached out and took eir off-hand in her own, brushing thumbpad over eir knuckles. "Thank you, my dear. Do you have a more pleasant question for me to answer?"
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"Of course. Why did you stay behind."
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