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@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ Figuring that, since dinner had come to a close, Codrin hazarded the first quest
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"Same." user11824 shrugged. "Though I'd be surprised if Dear had invited them."
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*"Quite,"* the fox said curtly.
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*"Quite,"* Dear said curtly.
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Debarre looked sheepishly at the fox, ears splayed. "Sorry, Dear. I know you've distanced yourself from all that."
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@ -130,13 +130,13 @@ Codrin was tempted to ask if Debarre had also known the author of the Ode, but k
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"More than I would've liked."
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Dear's partner laughed. "Why'd you even join, then?"
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Dear and Codrin's partner laughed. "Why'd you even join, then?"
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"Mom was a politician," he said, shrugging. "I learned all that bullshit from her, and the S-R Bloc gang pressed me into joining."
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"Who were they?" Codrin asked.
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"There were three of them on the Council. Part of the initial agreement, since the System was originally hosted somewhere in Russia." Debarre counted off on his fingers. "Those three, me, user11824, Zeke-- uh, Ezekiel, and then Michelle and Jonas."
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"There were three of them on the Council. Part of the initial agreement, since the System was originally hosted somewhere in Russia." Debarre counted off on his fingers. "Those three, me, user11824, Zeke– uh, Ezekiel, and then Michelle and Jonas."
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"Well, I know the Odists are here on the LVs, as well as you two and Ezekiel. Are Jonas and the Russians here?"
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@ -192,7 +192,7 @@ user11824 rolled his eyes and finished his wine.
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"In Toledot Yeshu, Paul is actually hinted at being a plant from the Jewish authorities, though it is vague as to who, whose goal was to introduce enough changes to the budding religion to cause it to split away so that it wouldn't remain a sect of Judaism."
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*"Many viewed Jesus as a rabbi,"* Dear interjected. *"And had that lasted to the point where Judaism headed into a rabbinical tradition after the destruction of the Second Temple, his teachings would have become part of the faith and Judaism would have looked very different."*
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*"Many viewed Jesus as a rabbi,"* Dear added. *"And had that lasted to the point where Judaism headed into a rabbinical tradition after the destruction of the Second Temple, his teachings would have become part of the faith and Judaism would have looked very different."*
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Codrin frowned. "Are you suggesting that Secession was engineered to keep the System from remaining a part of society, phys-side?"
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@ -206,7 +206,7 @@ Codrin finished eir wine and set the glass aside. "So you stayed away from the p
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Yared nodded.
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Debarre said, "We all were, towards the end. Anyone who was a true believer in Secession was a tool for True Name and Jonas, in a way, or at least a potential tool."
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Debarre said, "We all were, towards the end. Anyone who was a true believer in Secession was a tool for True Name and Jonas, in a way. Or at least a potential tool."
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"This was not what I was expecting out of the evening," Codrin admitted. "I was going to just ask you all why you decided to join the launch and everything."
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