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Madison Scott-Clary
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@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ Ioan collected eir thoughts for a moment, testing eir pen's nib against the pape
"May is in your stanza," Ioan said, frowning.
True Name winked, then continued, "But there were several others from other stanzas, as well. Praiseworthy and Qoheleth, yes, but many of the first lines and several of their initial forks helped out quite a bit. Even Hammered Silver, in her own way, helped. She kept Michelle company, helped her throughout the long years, They grew quite close, and through her, I was able to accomplish what I required from Michelle."
True Name winked, then continued, "But there were several others from other stanzas, as well. Praiseworthy and Qoheleth, yes, but many of the first lines and several of their initial forks helped out quite a bit. Even Hammered Silver, in her own way, helped. She kept Michelle company, helped her throughout the long years, they grew quite close, and through her, I was able to accomplish what I required from Michelle."
"Is that the difference between the liberal and conservative elements of the clade? The ones who were under your employ and aligned to it, and those who weren't?"
@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ The skunk puffed out a pent-up breath, laughing and fanning her face with a paw.
Ioan blinked, frowned. "You differ because of when it was that Michelle forked?"
"That is part of it," True Name said, catching her breath. "I read your notes, do you remember what it was that Douglas said about having a fever?"
"That is part of it," True Name said, catching her breath. "I read your notes. Do you remember what it was that Douglas said about having a fever?"
Ey prowled through the exo ey had devoted to this project, rifling through files of memories, then recited, "I had a very high fever, and when it was at its worst, I felt as though I was being offered a chance to peek behind a curtain, or at least see the shadows moving around backstage beneath the hem of it."