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Castor---Lagrange transmission delay:\\
Castor—Lagrange transmission delay:\\
38 days, 15 hours, 1 minute
\end{quote}
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Taking your advice along with that of True Name, of all people,\footnote{A part of me wonders if it's in response to the role you played between her and May Then My Name on Lagrange, offering a little bit of mediation to keep that gap bridged. I'm too shy to ask, I think.} I finally wrote to Sorina in a very open and, I hope, welcoming way. I want to find out where we stand, of course, but I also don't want to push \emph{that} much of a discussion on her. Just\ldots say hi and ensure that the line of communication remains open. I've attached what I wrote just so you're up to date as well.
I ran the letter by Dear, \Partner , Sarah, and True Name, and all of them kept telling me it was far too wordy. They're probably right, too,\footnote{True Name in particular suggested that this is still probably too long, but I sent it anyway, as I want to at least add a positive note about life on Castor.} as frustrating as it was to pare it down. I know we're a wordy bunch, but it was edging up past 2000 words, when all it needed to was act as an invitation to open discussions.
I ran the letter by Dear, \Partner, Sarah, and True Name, and all of them kept telling me it was far too wordy. They're probably right, too,\footnote{True Name in particular suggested that this is still probably too long, but I sent it anyway, as I want to at least add a positive note about life on Castor.} as frustrating as it was to pare it down. I know we're a wordy bunch, but it was edging up past 2000 words, when all it needed to was act as an invitation to open discussions.
All my best,